This is pretty damn nice.
You've got some solid art. The animation was great too (just one thing I noticed... the main character's shades blink). I can see you've really put a lot of work into this.
The voice acting was glorious. The voices were dynamic, flexible and, in my opinion, could easily work even for commercial projects.
The music, art, voice acting and dialogues put together create a lovely, stylish feel.
I love the general concept behind the storyline.
I don't like the execution and humor that much. I didn't laugh once, although I understood the humoristic elements. It was lacking on that side, as I see you tagged it as comedy. Also, I didn't find the plot twist at the end particularly interesting.